Yug
12-A
The Sad Truth
Struggle, Jockey, Pain,
Are words disguised
Nothing is vain
Everything is criticized
Let the mind suffer
Let not the body be a part
The journey will be unusually tougher,
Don’t worry, though, It will just be the start
Life isn’t a cake walk
The ups and downs are steep
The sad truth of the talk-
The ocean of problems is very deep
So let yourselves surrender
To courage and this rhyme
‘Cause one isn’t an offender,
In this struggle, and happiness isn’t a crime
Great poem Yug! Loved the rhyming scheme and the message. Keep writing..can’t wait to read your other creations!
In this “Yug”, Realization of ups & downs makes you real!
Very nice poem Yug! Keep writing more and more poems.